between the iron ways
29 January 07
a beat city, barren with colour,
withstands the nettle slips & stings of steps
as flat clubs tonguing in blunt flaps a solid safety,
a running beat the tapped bleat of the lost―this city is a beauty at the railtracks;
the empty traincars left dark
between the iron ways,
the hooked cranes paused in heavy arcs,
the far-off hum or whine of quiet unknown lights & by them all
the bent rock of the low sonic cliffs
creaking their ageless centre from human dawns,
a stuck age keeping the inner hill-wolf’s frown.it’s this, further on, the enclave of reeds
climbing a park, or snow’s crashed carriages burning
with the hillside frost―here is a close Alone
and the absence of built stone & glass
where my next steps take me―
not even seagulls come to ruffle their prayers
over this haulbuilt harbour.
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I was looking at various posts and poems on DeviantART and read your journal entry. Knowing how excellent your writing is, I was pretty disappointed that you had left. Luckily, you posted a link to this site, and I hope that it flourishes, as well.
I love the imagery you used in this poem. It’s hard to pick out an individual line or stanza that stands above the rest, as each part only adds to the overall piece. It’s probably my favorite of the short amount you’ve posted thus far. Good work.